Fucking brilliant, man. I hope to see more.
i wish i was watching tv rn
christopher isabella lamowitz.
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I hope you do too.
By that, I mean me naked.
It wasn't bad for a first performance. You just need to build up some more confidence (some parts came off a little awkward), but it still was pretty chill.
Thanks.
Really good! I loved the exterminator joke. Keep up it!
Thank you. I liked it too.
Not terrible, your jokes needs some work, some of them are definitely going in the right direction and they could be great if you reworded them and worked on the delivery.
I wouldn't start with all that "I'm bad with the ladies" stuff. Every amateur comedian I know or see loads their routine with that kind of stuff and you really need a brilliant take on it for it to sound fresh. The "I don't want to go to heaven" bit at the end was your best joke, but the follow up really didn't go anywhere.
Also, I'm with Gagsy, lose the hat. You want to be known for your comedy, you don't want to be "That guy with the weird hat."
I see, I see. Some of these were older jokes I've done and worked well. The 'I'm bad with women' thing kinda works for me, but I only have like 5 of those kinds of jokes, so don't worry.
The 'I don't want to die' bit, I think I just need to lose the ending I think.
Right now, I'm gonna keep the hat because with the hat, I feel a little bit more confident (though it doesn't show) and helps me out a bit. One day I might lose it.
Your input is much appreciated.
DUDE I HAD NO IDEA YOU WERE BLACK THIS IS AWESOME
No I am not african american.
This was great! Record it next time too.
I'll be sure to.
what a nigguh
wordddd.
That was pretty stale. Bone up on your counter-heckler comments.
What are you talking about?
Oh, I just implied you sucked, and that routine was incredibly banal, and mentally harmful on some level.
I also said, of course, in case you suck again in a venue where someone could see an opportunity to heckle you, have something witty and cutting already prepared to retaliate with.
Or don't. Comedy isn't your thing, anyways - no two ways about it. Just have fun, and don't quit the day job.
I disagree, but whatever. Thanks for some helpful tips?
Whatever.
Gagsy
I really thought you did well. Could tell how nervous you were but that's understandable considering it was your first performance. Still, you got me laughing.
WHY THE FUCK DID YOU WEAR THAT STUPID HAT THOUGH?! FFFFFFFFFFFFF
tehslaphappy
You love my hat. Shut up.